destroyer

twin1
twin1 Posts: 902
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
He is the destroyer of dreams,
he is the deliverer of pain,
he is the thorn in your side,
when you want sun he is the rain,

He drinks your tears like wine,
he feeds on your inner woes,
your misery is his victory,
his high comes from your low,

He is the enemy of peace,
his words cut you to the quick,
he is the smile on a fox,
in truth he's just a dick,

He takes joy in his games,
he reaps what he sows,
he is always two steps ahead of you,
creating anguish is what he knows,

He licks his lips to sweet confrontation,
puts footprints on your soul,
he keeps the key to your jail cell,
his stillness never lacks undertow,

He is the lava in the volcano,
his ashes burn with no regret,
his snakelike venom is precise,
he always snares you in his net,

He seems to be unhuman,
what creature could this be,
for he keeps a guarded tower
and will never let you free...
Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    i think you do not like somebody
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    Hey! What do you mean??!! That is my fantasy guy! Doesn't he just sound soooo dreamy...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    Good writing. Creepy stuff. Is that about your ex?
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    twin2 wrote:
    Good writing. Creepy stuff. Is that about your ex?

    what gave it away? I wrote it right after a 2 hour "phone battle"...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    Hey, you know he and I never hit it off anyway. There are reasons he made the hair on the back of my neck stand up. You ok?

    twin1 wrote:
    what gave it away? I wrote it right after a 2 hour "phone battle"...
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Gosh, here I thought you were being coy and referring to the devil! ;)
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    justam wrote:
    Gosh, here I thought you were being coy and referring to the devil! ;)

    Anti-Christ, devil, pretty much sums Tony up...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    twin2 wrote:
    Hey, you know he and I never hit it off anyway. There are reasons he made the hair on the back of my neck stand up. You ok?

    Yes, I know. I'm o.k., I held my own for the "circle talk"...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • trinityeliza
    trinityeliza Posts: 426
    hope you're a-ok??? i liked the poem, and i think he may be my ex fiance's twin!!!!
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    trinityeliza wrote:
    hope you're a-ok??? i liked the poem, and i think he may be my ex fiance's twin!!!!

    Yes, I am! Could be that - I sympathize with you, I truly do!!! (sorry I am logged into my sister's account - I am twin 1 here, forgot to change it)
  • trinityeliza
    trinityeliza Posts: 426
    twin2 wrote:
    I sympathize with you, I truly do!!!

    Likewise, my dear :)
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • bigbill
    bigbill Posts: 42
    you know i'm not the pity patrol
    you are a free woman nobody held that phone to your ear
  • trinityeliza
    trinityeliza Posts: 426
    bigbill wrote:
    you know i'm not the pity patrol
    you are a free woman nobody held that phone to your ear

    You sound like a man who enjoys sparring with his woman/women???? You translate as a sexist egomaniacal windbag!
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    trinityeliza wrote:
    You sound like a man who enjoys sparring with his woman/women???? You translate as a sexist egomaniacal windbag!

    Yeah, that would be my brother-in-law alright. He is really charming! Loves to get a rise...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    bigbill wrote:
    you know i'm not the pity patrol
    you are a free woman nobody held that phone to your ear


    Ohhh, I thought you wanted to become a member of the pity patrol! We are accepting applications. It was superglue I think...maybe
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • bigbill
    bigbill Posts: 42
    twin1 wrote:
    Ohhh, I thought you wanted to become a member of the pity patrol! We are accepting applications. It was superglue I think...maybe
    i don't had enough heart to become a member
    point is only you can stop the games.
  • UpHereInMyTree500
    UpHereInMyTree500 Posts: 1,772
    I thought it was about God when I first read it...but its quite powerfully written, very hateful???
    did u mean it to come across as being hateful like this??
    Wave came crashing...
  • bigbill
    bigbill Posts: 42
    trinityeliza wrote:
    You sound like a man who enjoys sparring with his woman/women???? You translate as a sexist egomaniacal windbag!
    well i see why he didn't marry you
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    UpHereInMyTree500 wrote:
    I thought it was about God when I first read it...but its quite powerfully written, very hateful???
    did u mean it to come across as being hateful like this??

    Yes, actually I was venting. I am usually a calm, loving, and level-headed person however, there is one person in my life that pushes my buttons and can get me to snap a twig sometimes and actually I know he rather enjoys it. That is frustrating to me as I prefer peace but not everyone does. I do know he does it on purpose and I fall into that "game" sometimes and feel bad about it later. Sorry it was so hateful!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • trinityeliza
    trinityeliza Posts: 426
    bigbill wrote:
    well i see why he didn't marry you

    My husband is VERY happy and a very well loved man in everyway, thank you much. YOU on the other hand,... I can see why the twins have your head between the hammer and the anvil. I expected some sort on mindless drivel in return from you. Shoe FLY SHOE!!!!
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!

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