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the little bird

twin1twin1 Posts: 902
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
There is a little bird, don't scare him away,
he sits on the fence, from day to day,
Not sure of his direction, of where he should go,
Seems to be unsure of things he doesn't know,
If you nudge the little bird, do it gently with care,
If you are too tough and abrupt, you will only scare,
If you enlighten him with true giving patient love,
Even if you do not know it, sometimes that is enough...
Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    This is really beautiful sis. I like it alot.
  • studio54ravemanstudio54raveman Posts: 72
    twin1 wrote:
    There is a little bird, don't scare him away,
    he sits on the fence, from day to day,
    Not sure of his direction, of where he should go,
    Seems to be unsure of things he doesn't know,
    If you nudge the little bird, do it gently with care,
    If you are too tough and abrupt, you will only scare,
    If you enlighten him with true giving patient love,
    Even if you do not know it, sometimes that is enough...


    This is well written. It makes me think of my girl. She is my babybird.
    BOW-WOW-WOW-YIPPIE YO YIPPIE YA
    BOW WOW WOW YIPPIE YO
    It's kinda hard in the L.B.C.
    When you're the SNOOP DO-GG!!!

    ME SAY"SHUGGY FO SHUGGY MY NOOGIE!!!!"-URBAN BOOGIE

    "REMEMBER KIDS LIVING IN TOTALITARIAN COMMUNES BREEDS DISSIDENCE"- POOPY BOOGIE'S TINKY
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    studio54raveman wrote:
    This is well written. It makes me think of my girl. She is my babybird.

    That is so sweet! :):)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I like using my slingshot to hit birds. Especially when they are on powerlines














    jk....goodun
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • bigbillbigbill Posts: 42
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I like using my slingshot to hit birds. Especially when they are on powerlines













    jk....goodun
    i'm not joking i do
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I like using my slingshot to hit birds. Especially when they are on powerlines














    jk....goodun

    Yeah, I guess at least they would move that way... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
    studio54raveman wrote:
    This is well written. It makes me think of my girl. She is my babybird.
    Ha ha I call my mother my Mama Bird!! :)
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Ultra sweet and full of smiles, twin1! This one is just lovely. :):)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    man do I love this poem!!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Love from my God who I believe in with all of my heart and soul.
    He is a forgiving God to those who love him and seek him.

    "Love is patient;
    love is kind.
    Love is not jealous or boastful;
    it is not arrogant or rude.
    Love does not insist on its own way;
    it is not irritable-or resentful;
    it does not rejoice at wrong
    but rejoices in the right.

    Love bears all things,
    believes all things, hopes
    all things, endures all things.

    Love is a patient heart.
    Love never ends."
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    twin2 wrote:
    Love from my God who I believe in with all of my heart and soul.
    He is a forgiving God to those who love him and seek him.

    "Love is patient;
    love is kind.
    Love is not jealous or boastful;
    it is not arrogant or rude.
    Love does not insist on its own way;
    it is not irritable-or resentful;
    it does not rejoice at wrong
    but rejoices in the right.

    Love bears all things,
    believes all things, hopes
    all things, endures all things.

    Love is a patient heart.
    Love never ends."

    Thank you sis! You are making me all warm and fuzzy inside! And I think he would be very happy that you shared that! :):)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Thank you all! I am glad you enjoyed it! Talk at ya' next year! :):)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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