unwind

twin1
twin1 Posts: 902
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
At the end of the day,
when your sitter is mad because you're late,
so you can only grit your teeth and cooperate,
it was raining so hard you couldn't see a thing,
the neighbor's dog got into your trash again,
your child wants to play with only the toys that are broken,
and dinner is still in the freezer...frozen,
you could take a bath,
but you just don't have the time,
and you need something quick to help you unwind...

C is for can't get enough
H is for heavenly
O is for outta the wrapper in seconds
C is for Cadbury, Hersheys, Godiva, whatever will do
O is for outrageously smooth
L is for lick it, suck it, nibble, or inhale
A is for a meal in itself
T is for your time not to share
E is for eaten with no crumbs to spare

ahhh...a woman's best friend :)
Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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  • imspinnin
    imspinnin Posts: 933
    *sigh*
    I need some chocolate right now...nice poem.:)
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    twin1 wrote:
    ahhh...a woman's best friend :)
    Not just women's best friend....
    although mine is alcohol at the moment

    nice read
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Ger
    Ger Posts: 12
    Oh, where art thou, my dearest choco-herbal-Ed-listening-lover?

    Hope life is treating you well...

    Love,
    Ger

    "...i simply decided to stop waiting for you to quit being so fucking timid..." ~ awww....
    "...i change by not changing at all..."
  • afan
    afan Posts: 59
    From the chocoholic herself. Nice one. That made me smile.
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    Thanks to all! Chocolate keeps me sane (yeah, right)! Just wanted to make you guys smile... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    afan wrote:
    From the chocoholic herself. Nice one. That made me smile.

    perhaps I could share some with you...NOT! I will hand over any other food to you but guard that like a dog... I'm glad that you are smiling, I miss seeing it :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • afan
    afan Posts: 59
    twin1 wrote:
    perhaps I could share some with you...NOT! I will hand over any other food to you but guard that like a dog... I'm glad that you are smiling, I miss seeing it :)

    Yeah, like you share the sauce for the breadsticks!? Yeah, ok!!!
    I smile from time to time. It just slips out.
  • Holey Ghost
    Holey Ghost Posts: 744
    Jamal wrote:
    Not just women's best friend....
    although mine is alcohol at the moment

    nice read

    very nice poem...makes me want to taste it

    vd1.jpg
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Pearl_Jam_Necklace
    Pearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    imspinnin wrote:
    *sigh*
    I need some chocolate right now...nice poem.:)


    nice poem indeed. i wish chocolate did that for me...my friend has just a bite of chocolate and i swear she makes noises like an orgasm....it does nothing for me damnit!!
    but i cant wait to show her ur poem
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Ger wrote:
    Oh, where art thou, my dearest choco-herbal-Ed-listening-lover?

    Hope life is treating you well...

    Love,
    Ger

    "...i simply decided to stop waiting for you to quit being so fucking timid..." ~ awww....


    la hedonista never comes 'round these parts...


    :(
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    Thanx to all - glad you enjoyed it!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    afan wrote:
    Yeah, like you share the sauce for the breadsticks!? Yeah, ok!!!


    (looks wide eyed and innocent), don't know what you're talking about...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    twin1 wrote:
    At the end of the day,
    when your sitter is mad because you're late,
    so you can only grit your teeth and cooperate,
    it was raining so hard you couldn't see a thing,
    the neighbor's dog got into your trash again,
    your child wants to play with only the toys that are broken,
    and dinner is still in the freezer...frozen,
    you could take a bath,
    but you just don't have the time,
    and you need something quick to help you unwind...

    C is for can't get enough
    H is for heavenly
    O is for outta the wrapper in seconds
    C is for Cadbury, Hersheys, Godiva, whatever will do
    O is for outrageously smooth
    L is for lick it, suck it, nibble, or inhale
    A is for a meal in itself
    T is for your time not to share
    E is for eaten with no crumbs to spare

    ahhh...a woman's best friend :)
    A COMPLETE ,TRUE, WORK OF ART IN POETRY!!!!!!!:D

    LOVE YOU TWIN!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    Thanx Ali - LOVE YOU TOO!!!

    Thanx depop!

    I am glad you guys enjoyed it and I hope it brought some smiles! :):)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!

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