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Suicide Note

SpunkieSpunkie i come from downtown. Posts: 6,680
edited March 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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  • SpunkieSpunkie i come from downtown. Posts: 6,680
    *Please note. The above was a no poem word, reflecting the title. I am not suicidal, and emotionally stable. I am even happy for the most part, although I don't believe happiness to be the end all in being.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    A morse code suicide note might be novel.
  • Worldwidesuicide08Worldwidesuicide08 Posts: 79
    tish wrote:
    *Please note. The above was a no poem word, reflecting the title. I am not suicidal, and emotionally stable. I am even happy for the most part, although I don't believe happiness to be the end all in being.
    I nearly posted dont do it til i saw the poetry thread.
    Cant touch the bottom...


    London 96.
    Manchester 00.
    London 07.
  • ClariceClarice Posts: 256
    tish wrote:
    *Please note. The above was a no poem word, reflecting the title. I am not suicidal, and emotionally stable. I am even happy for the most part, although I don't believe happiness to be the end all in being.

    it is a short and definitive poem.
  • writersuwritersu Posts: 1,867
    tish wrote:
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    I find it mildly profound.......or very profound and obscure that you wrote this and then left it blank so much like someone might do who does something like that and leaves so many unanswered questions.......
    Baby, You Wouldn't Last a Minute on The Creek......


    Together we will float like angels.........

    In the moment that you left the room, the album started skipping, goodbye to beauty shared with the ones that you love.........
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    perfect tish. just perfect. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • harmless_little_f***harmless_little_f*** Posts: 8,005
    *walks in.. walks out again*
    'We're learning songs for baby Jesus' birthday. His mum and dad were Merry and Joseph. He had a bed made of clay and the three kings bought him Gold, Frankenstein and Merv as presents.'

    - the great Sir Leo Harrison
  • writersuwritersu Posts: 1,867
    writersu wrote:
    I find it mildly profound.......or very profound and obscure that you wrote this and then left it blank so much like someone might do who does something like that and leaves so many unanswered questions.......


    I hope you got the message that I meant to clearly portray to you; that is a very deep concept. And as a writer of the poem, when I said profound and obscure, I meant ingenious..........
    Baby, You Wouldn't Last a Minute on The Creek......


    Together we will float like angels.........

    In the moment that you left the room, the album started skipping, goodbye to beauty shared with the ones that you love.........
  • theskyabovetheskyabove Posts: 77
    i think it's neat cuz, with no text... it's like the deed was complete...

    and i only came to that conclusion that that's what you meant well after i'd read the whole thread. so...

    i was gonna tell ya not to too
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