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Our Flower

NothinGBetteRPJMaNNothinGBetteRPJMaN Posts: 530
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Together we planted a seed
Watered it with love and affection
gave it anything it would need

This was our love together
We grew it to withstand the seasons
and to stand tall forever

Then the winds came, then the snow
and then our little flower
no longer would grow

I watched as you left
Leaving me on my own
Because you thought it was best

Now I sit by myself
Try to keep alive
but with no one to help

Our flowers needs your rain
And I have given up
Because you have done the same

So I silently watch our flower
losings its pedals
more and more each hour
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he grew a beard.
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    this one really seemed to drag with it on it's train of emotions... :o

    in the end, it left me... sad and alone.

    Very nice how you use the flower as a metaphore :)
    (i hope it's a metaphore and you didn't really plant a flower together?) ;)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • NothinGBetteRPJMaNNothinGBetteRPJMaN Posts: 530
    Jamal wrote:
    this one really seemed to drag with it on it's train of emotions... :o

    Seemed to drag....as to drag on? :(

    haha no we didnt really plant a flower but I wouldnt have doing that :)

    Thanks.....didnt mean to make ya sad or alone :) Cheer up and plant a flower.....metaphorically
    *Official Marker in the Sand Fan Club Junkie*
    Member # 0004

    Rather than being birthed like a normal child, Chuck Norris instead
    decided to punch his way out of his mother's womb. Shortly thereafter
    he grew a beard.
  • NothinGBetteRPJMaNNothinGBetteRPJMaN Posts: 530
    NothinGBetteRPJMaN wrote:
    Our flowers needs your rain
    And I have given up
    Because you have done the same
    r

    Btw it should be flower....not flowers
    *Official Marker in the Sand Fan Club Junkie*
    Member # 0004

    Rather than being birthed like a normal child, Chuck Norris instead
    decided to punch his way out of his mother's womb. Shortly thereafter
    he grew a beard.
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    NothinGBetteRPJMaN wrote:
    Seemed to drag....as to drag on? :(
    Oops, I seem to have forgotten "me"
    it dragged "me" with it on its train of emotions

    which is obvioussly a good thing :)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    NothinGBetteRPJMaN wrote:
    Together we planted a seed
    Watered it with love and affection
    gave it anything it would need

    This was our love together
    We grew it to withstand the seasons
    and to stand tall forever

    Then the winds came, then the snow
    and then our little flower
    no longer would grow

    I watched as you left
    Leaving me on my own
    Because you thought it was best

    Now I sit by myself
    Try to keep alive
    but with no one to help

    Our flowers needs your rain
    And I have given up
    Because you have done the same

    So I silently watch our flower
    losings its pedals
    more and more each hour

    It sounds like your gardening partner needs to give you some more love!! :)
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