Broken Again
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lonely
loves me
more than you
nothing i can do
lie in pain
feel the rain
clouds my day
wish i could say
i love you
oh how i want to
come to me
im open
ready to be broken
again....again..again
I think this sucks dont you? I wrote this in like 5 minutes while drinking... now....i think thats the only time i let myself open nough to write.
loves me
more than you
nothing i can do
lie in pain
feel the rain
clouds my day
wish i could say
i love you
oh how i want to
come to me
im open
ready to be broken
again....again..again
I think this sucks dont you? I wrote this in like 5 minutes while drinking... now....i think thats the only time i let myself open nough to write.
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Rather than being birthed like a normal child, Chuck Norris instead
decided to punch his way out of his mother's womb. Shortly thereafter
he grew a beard.
Member # 0004
Rather than being birthed like a normal child, Chuck Norris instead
decided to punch his way out of his mother's womb. Shortly thereafter
he grew a beard.
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i like it.
i often used to write whilst drinking. sometimes it was shit, other times it could be a revelation.
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
Member # 0004
Rather than being birthed like a normal child, Chuck Norris instead
decided to punch his way out of his mother's womb. Shortly thereafter
he grew a beard.
The first four lines are good.
lonely
loves me
more than you
nothing i can do
then you overwhelmed yourself.
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i really like these parts
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key