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eMMI
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went out the other night
the world had turned pale pink
sunset time
the sky was cut in half
it was like pages in a book
one next to the other
on the other side
clouds like feathers
on the wings of a bird
but softer, rounder
the other page
sky blazing orange and red
like fireworks
after a delighthful party
reminding me there's life
I went back inside
and everything was fine
umm, just some thoughts after a pretty sunset.
not maybe best I've written, but this is the first time I'm writing poetry in english.
the world had turned pale pink
sunset time
the sky was cut in half
it was like pages in a book
one next to the other
on the other side
clouds like feathers
on the wings of a bird
but softer, rounder
the other page
sky blazing orange and red
like fireworks
after a delighthful party
reminding me there's life
I went back inside
and everything was fine
umm, just some thoughts after a pretty sunset.
not maybe best I've written, but this is the first time I'm writing poetry in english.
"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
thank you very much.
thanks.
I like to use a lot of details. I think it sets the mood a lot and makes it easier to "get in".
nice titles, maybe I'll steal one of them.
I like to use metaphors but they usually suck or are hard to understand, so thank you.