the moon crept out of sight

eMMI
eMMI Posts: 6,262
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the moon was beautiful
I wish you could have been there
my window was dirty and blotchy
but I couldn't stop staring at the moon

no wonder I didn't get any sleep
I wish you'd been there

I made some tea
enough for two cups like always
think I drank only half though

I saw so many stars too!
I know how much you like stars
or was that just me?

then the universe moved and
the moon crept out of sight
I listened to some music,
thought about all kinds of thigs
like I always do

I just wish you could have been there
"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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  • Steve Dunne
    Steve Dunne Posts: 4,965
    last night
    you threw us a full moon
    from across the sea

    it lit up the snow covered ground
    the night almost turned a color of blue
    instead of darkness
    I love to turn you on
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i like your style kid...
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    chadwick wrote:
    i like your style kid...

    why thanks. :)

    (assuming you're talking about me instead of mr. Dunne ;))

    first thing I've written in a looooong time, glad I got something out.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    Steve Dunne wrote:
    last night
    you threw us a full moon
    from across the sea

    it lit up the snow covered ground
    the night almost turned a color of blue
    instead of darkness

    that's beautiful. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    eMMI wrote:
    why thanks. :)

    (assuming you're talking about me instead of mr. Dunne ;))

    first thing I've written in a looooong time, glad I got something out.

    yes you eMMI.
    tis your thread.

    although mr. Dunne
    does have an impressive
    addition to this thread.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    chadwick wrote:
    yes you eMMI.
    tis your thread.

    although mr. Dunne
    does have an impressive
    addition to this thread.

    can't hurt to be sure. :D

    impressive indeed.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    eMMI, this is a very sweet way to say you miss someone. :)
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  • Steve Dunne
    Steve Dunne Posts: 4,965
    eMMI wrote:
    that's beautiful. :)

    thanks, you're not so bad yourself!! :) and thanks for the inspiration!!!
    I love to turn you on
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    justam wrote:
    eMMI, this is a very sweet way to say you miss someone. :)

    :) thanks.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    Steve Dunne wrote:
    thanks, you're not so bad yourself!! :) and thanks for the inspiration!!!

    thank you kindly. :) and you're very very welcome. I find that the greatest compliment is somebody being inspired by something I've written.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • Steve Dunne
    Steve Dunne Posts: 4,965
    eMMI wrote:
    thank you kindly. :) and you're very very welcome. I find that the greatest compliment is somebody being inspired by something I've written.

    :D
    I love to turn you on
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    eMMI wrote:
    thank you kindly. :) and you're very very welcome. I find that the greatest compliment is somebody being inspired by something I've written.

    eMMI,

    How about when someone writes with the inspiring energy that comes from someone/a Muse?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    chadwick wrote:
    eMMI,

    How about when someone writes with the inspiring energy that comes from someone/a Muse?

    inspiration, no matter where/who it comes from, is pretty much always a good thing.

    and that someone/Muse will most likely be very flattered..
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • Steve Dunne
    Steve Dunne Posts: 4,965
    ...last night while staring into space
    my little girls clung to the windowsill
    amazed that with the shades open
    they had the best nightlight...
    I love to turn you on
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    eMMI wrote:
    inspiration, no matter where/who it comes from, is pretty much always a good thing.

    and that someone/Muse will most likely be very flattered..

    oh the powerful Muse.
    how awesome the energy
    contained inside such wonders.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • eulusso
    eulusso Posts: 50
    don't miss my house, I
    still lay down watch the moon, I
    miss my window frame

    Eulusso

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