A River Behind Mars

eMMI
eMMI Posts: 6,262
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
there's a river behind Mars
deep and calm
river of the truth unveiling
slowly drying up
baring what it holds inside
revealing the dead fish
rotten plants
poisoned soil
and heart-stopping fumes

the people are laughing
"man, what a special effect"
everything's allright
we can handle the truth, right
a river behind Mars
isn't it the new sitcom?





uh huh. this ended up a teeny bit more depressed than I had planned..
trying to make people think, dunno if I succeed.. :p
any comments highly appreciated!!
"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    I thought it was an interesting read.
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    twin2 wrote:
    I thought it was an interesting read.

    thank you. :)

    it got a little out of hand..
    to me it makes sense of course, because I know what I mean but..

    but everyone can interpret it the way they want. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."

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