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My Life Is Brilliant

eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
one day I woke up
to see there's nothing to do
she loves the other guy
while I fancy you

you look so fine
I love your blue eyes
really you ain't that handsome
but your voice sure is nice

she loves you and hates you
and she's with that other dude
I like you and love you
but we'll never do

what can I say
I love her so much
she's my best friend
and I hate her guts

leading you on
like a stupid vamp
oh, and for her
you'd become a tramp

fuck this is hard
how did I come to this?
this ain't gonna work
but already you guys I miss

this will not do
I'm quitting this game
the hell I am!
tomorrow it'll all be the same
"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    this ended up long. :p

    haha, the sad part is that this is actually a quite realistic picture of my life. :):o oh, picture, yeah right! the right word just runs away from me. :D
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Aw, eMMI, this friend of yours...sounds like you'd be better off without her, really. Things won't change unless you make it happen. :)

    I liked your poem because it's from the heart. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I liked your poem too.
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    Aw, eMMI, this friend of yours...sounds like you'd be better off without her, really. Things won't change unless you make it happen. :)

    I liked your poem because it's from the heart. :)

    god, I know.!
    but I can't live without her. she's maybe the best friend i've ever had, we're on the same wave lenght.. :o
    but sometimes she just drives me crazy!!! :(

    I seriously have a hard time "getting rid of" friendships that ain't good..
    but time will show. as soon as school ends, we're probably off to other directions, maybe at least then things will get better.. dunno.
    but I sincerely thank you for your kindness! :)
    someaday i'll make the difference! I promise.

    and thank you for your complement about my poem, it means a lot! like A LOT! :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    twin2 wrote:
    I liked your poem too.

    thanks. I like your poems too. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    eMMI wrote:
    thanks. I like your poems too. :)


    Thanks. It's appreciated.
  • stuckinlinestuckinline Posts: 3,369
    wow, eMMI, what a powerful poem!
    hope everything works out for you:)
    peace!
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    gluten919 wrote:
    wow, eMMI, what a powerful poem!
    hope everything works out for you:)
    peace!

    thanks! :)
    thanks seems sometimes very worn out but I mean it! :):)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    eMMI wrote:
    god, I know.!
    but I can't live without her. she's maybe the best friend i've ever had, we're on the same wave lenght.. :o
    but sometimes she just drives me crazy!!! :(

    I seriously have a hard time "getting rid of" friendships that ain't good..
    but time will show. as soon as school ends, we're probably off to other directions, maybe at least then things will get better.. dunno.
    but I sincerely thank you for your kindness! :)
    someaday i'll make the difference! I promise.

    and thank you for your complement about my poem, it means a lot! like A LOT! :)

    You're so welcome, sweetie! :)

    I had a pretty awful friend that I knew since kindergarden and so, I felt obligated to remain friends even though she wasn't good for me. Sometimes, when someone takes advantage of you for so long, it just feels natural that that's what should be happening. It took about 18 years for me to see the light but I finally did. You will too! :)

    I still think about her sometimes and hope she's doing okay. I also hope that maybe she learned a hard lesson about what really being a good friend means and has been able to find some real friends.

    I was lucky enough to have another friend from the same kindergarden class who was/is a gem! Just a beautiful human being! We're still best buds. :D

    I'm holding you to your promise!!! :D:D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    You're so welcome, sweetie! :)

    I had a pretty awful friend that I knew since kindergarden and so, I felt obligated to remain friends even though she wasn't good for me. Sometimes, when someone takes advantage of you for so long, it just feels natural that that's what should be happening. It took about 18 years for me to see the light but I finally did. You will too! :)

    I still think about her sometimes and hope she's doing okay. I also hope that maybe she learned a hard lesson about what really being a good friend means and has been able to find some real friends.

    I was lucky enough to have another friend from the same kindergarden class who was/is a gem! Just a beautiful human being! We're still best buds. :D

    I'm holding you to your promise!!! :D:D

    okay. :)
    thanks a lot. :) you're really kind. :o
    almost make me wanna cry. :o:)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    eMMI wrote:
    okay. :)
    thanks a lot. :) you're really kind. :o
    almost make me wanna cry. :o:)

    No tears!!!! :) There are a lot of good people out there and if you remember that you're a good person, who deserves really good friends, you'll find them. :)

    Real friends, you'll never feel that hate that you feel towards this one you have now. Real friends support you, care about you, make you feel good, make you feel you can tell them about ANYTHING...they're amazing! You can actually love them forever and ever!!

    I can tell you this, my best friend and I are very different. We live our lives very differently and sometimes we don't even talk for weeks but yet, not a beat is missed when we talk or get together. I really don't know what I'd do without her friendship and she's taught me a lot about what being a good freind is. I really love her with all my heart and don't feel strange telling her that or hearing that from her. It's such a good thing, having real friends.

    YOU SO DESERVE THAT!!! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    No tears!!!! :) There are a lot of good people out there and if you remember that you're a good person, who deserves really good friends, you'll find them. :)

    Real friends, you'll never feel that hate that you feel towards this one you have now. Real friends support you, care about you, make you feel good, make you feel you can tell them about ANYTHING...they're amazing! You can actually love them forever and ever!!

    I can tell you this, my best friend and I are very different. We live our lives very differently and sometimes we don't even talk for weeks but yet, not a beat is missed when we talk or get together. I really don't know what I'd do without her friendship and she's taught me a lot about what being a good freind is. I really love her with all my heart and don't feel strange telling her that or hearing that from her. It's such a good thing, having real friends.

    YOU SO DESERVE THAT!!! :)

    BE...You always take the words right out of my mouth. Well said.
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    i love your poetry
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    No tears!!!! :) There are a lot of good people out there and if you remember that you're a good person, who deserves really good friends, you'll find them. :)

    Real friends, you'll never feel that hate that you feel towards this one you have now. Real friends support you, care about you, make you feel good, make you feel you can tell them about ANYTHING...they're amazing! You can actually love them forever and ever!!

    I can tell you this, my best friend and I are very different. We live our lives very differently and sometimes we don't even talk for weeks but yet, not a beat is missed when we talk or get together. I really don't know what I'd do without her friendship and she's taught me a lot about what being a good freind is. I really love her with all my heart and don't feel strange telling her that or hearing that from her. It's such a good thing, having real friends.

    YOU SO DESERVE THAT!!! :)

    thank you! :)
    there's nothing more I can say. thank you. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    twin2 wrote:
    BE...You always take the words right out of my mouth. Well said.

    and thank you too! :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    lovin kind wrote:
    i love your poetry

    oh, you love my poetry?! :)
    I'm overwhelmed. really I am! :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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