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Look At Me

eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
LOOK
can you see me?
LOOK
can't you see I care?
LOOK
see me spin round and round
LOOK
look at me dammit!
see me you fool!
LOOK LOOK LOOK
can you see me waving my hand?
I think I'm in love with you
"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :D LOL! That was cute, eMMI! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
    I agree BE :)
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    :) thanks BE.
    and thanks you too trinityeliza!

    :):):)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    it's frustrating when that happens - the most important person in my life doesn't seem to see me - but she has an excuse i haven't introduced myself to her yet.

    it really is! :o

    well, I think her excuse seems a little made up! :D no, kidding. :)
    maybe you should do something about it..? considering you just described her as the most important person in your life. ;)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    maybe i will, i might introduce myself to her on the train tonight - we've been smiling at each other for a few weeks now - i don't like it when i enter a carrige and she's not there - just looking at her looking and smiling at me i wake up a look forward to seeing her, i fall asleep and dream of seeing her................................ maybe if i spoke to her this magic bubble will burst

    That is worth finding out don't you think?! Or it could be your lost soul mate and the best decision you ever make. Good luck to you with that!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Love the ending!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • chromiamchromiam Posts: 4,114
    A great view of when someone has your complete attention and has no idea you're even there....
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    thank you poet and thank you too chromiam!! :):)
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    maybe i will, i might introduce myself to her on the train tonight - we've been smiling at each other for a few weeks now - i don't like it when i enter a carrige and she's not there - just looking at her looking and smiling at me i wake up a look forward to seeing her, i fall asleep and dream of seeing her................................ maybe if i spoke to her this magic bubble will burst

    wow, you're really into her! :) that's nice.
    well, if she smiles at you she can't think that badly of you, right? :)
    and yeah, what if you'll never talk to her and someday you'll find her smiling to an another guy.. :o now that wouldn't be nice would it?
    but I don't wanna rush you but I really think you should talk to her at some point.
    reading what you written (quoted above).. :) man, go for it! when you're ready! :D

    but sure, your bubble can burst.. :( but it can burst if you don't ever talk to her.. and all of us get bursted bubbles at some point in our lives. :o it ain't fun but it's life.

    but I'm no counsellor.
    it just happens to be my opinion that you deffinately should talk to her.
    not obviously confess your true love for her at first ( :D ) but talk about the weather. or to where she travels with that train.. :)
    just suggestions.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    I tried to talk to her weds evening -
    i was listening to ben harper getting all G'ed up
    butterflies in the belly and all that... final going to speak to the beatufil blonde haired stranger......
    i went to talk to her as she boarded the train i smiled at her,
    she smiled back

    but she kind of looked down at the floor - i moved forward.... opened my mouth to speak....
    a kind of croaky sound came out...
    and she walked past...
    i felt such an idoit...
    i got all dizzy and lost my balance (computer rebooting thing)
    couldn't dare to look at her after that

    oh dear..
    I'm really sorry..
    I don't exactly know what to say now. if I were there I'd give you a hug.

    looked down at the floor? maybe she was nervous too..
    oh man. tough.

    maybe it wasn't that bad. :o
    (I'd maybe say you should try and smile at her again.. but maybe I should just shut up. )

    sorry, I'm all out of words with this one..
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    i will try again!

    i have to

    good! :)
    that's the spirit! :D

    now that you've practised, it should go great! :);)
    lemme know how it goes. will you? :) (don't wanna intrude though. :) )
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    still practicing, running things over in my head - see love reverberation

    sounds good. :)
    love the poem. I might just print it out if you don't mind.? :o
    I'm sure it'll go great! :D cause you've practised. :)
    but don't stress yourself out too much, okay? ;):)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    of course print away

    just don't use it when your short of loo role

    thanks. :)

    of course I won't! what do you think I am?! :rolleyes:
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    i don't know but i do know the things i have been prepared to use when i have been caught without toilet paper!!!

    but my words used to wipe an arse - that would'nt be so bad? - Would it?

    dammit! our stupid printer won't print the first half of it!!
    oh well, I'll just print it in school tomorrow. :D

    well, I've never been caught without toilet paper, so I don't really know what it'll do to a person. :D

    and I've never thought about that last one..
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    I tried to talk to her weds evening -
    i was listening to ben harper getting all G'ed up
    butterflies in the belly and all that... final going to speak to the beatufil blonde haired stranger......
    i went to talk to her as she boarded the train i smiled at her,
    she smiled back

    but she kind of looked down at the floor - i moved forward.... opened my mouth to speak....
    a kind of croaky sound came out...
    and she walked past...
    i felt such an idoit...
    i got all dizzy and lost my balance (computer rebooting thing)
    couldn't dare to look at her after that

    Please do try again. I am excited and nervous for you! If she looked down it might be that she is shy and nervous too. Let us know what happens and don't give up, that's for sure! We are all rooting for ya'!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    well at least some one cared enough to print it, - we live in a throw away society so i know it would'nt be kept for ever - better giving it a secondary use before discarding it! - that's my feelings

    so if you are caught short wipe away - alternatively use the yellow pages!

    I really like it, so I'll print it. :)
    and btw, I hardly ever throw away anything, so it'll stick with me for a while. ;)

    but I'll consider your suggestion.
    and maybe I'll use some other paper (yellow pages) before it, printing paper is quite rough..
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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