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is it you?

eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
is it you?
will it be you? always.

who is the one, whose eyes are glazing upon me so hatefully?
is it you maybe?
who is the one, whose hand is touching my skin so lovingly?
maybe, just maybe you?

will you tell me I'm beautiful?
(body, mind and soul)
will you look me in the eyes?
(mirror/window)
will you carry me when I'm falling?
(I'm crumbling)

or has it already been done?
by you, maybe?
"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    This one sounds like someone who isn't quite sure if they've lost someone they love. It's like how you feel after a rotten argument with your lover, one where one of you ends up walking out the door and the person left behind the closed door is just staring at it blankly, wondering, "is it you?"

    I like it, eMMI-lou! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oeh, the question marks, I can't help but wonder. But then again that's probably what you were aming for. Well done for the feel you gave this poem it really comes across. nice reading matirial thank you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    thank you kindly BE and karma. :)

    I wasn't quite sure about this one.. I'm terribly glad you like it. :):)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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