he doesn't want you here!

eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
a beautiful day
birds are singing, sun is shining

a long walk
decided to check out the old playgrounds

in the woods
"why don't I walk down this path, see where it takes me"

took the headphones off to listen
birds singing, sun shining, beautiful spring day

a bend on the path
tall trees, a gnawing feeling

a tree, with a branch hanging by a thread
"you're hurt"
"you're hurt"

go away!!
"what? why? you're hurt!!"
go away now! he doesn't want you here!!
"who is he?"

a clear vision
sudden and frightening, something is wrong

LEAVE NOW! HE WILL BE MAD!

can't run, too much noise
don't want to turn my back, it's too frightening
he's here

something has happened here
he doesn't want me there

help me.
"I can't"
he did this to me.
he did this.
he did this.
he did this.
he did this.
"I know he did it, I can't help you, I don't know who you are"
he's here, run, go!

turn my head, look over my shoulder
if I can make it there he can't follow

panic, anxiety, fear
can't run, turn my head

can't run.
can't run.
can't run.
can't run.
can't run.
can't run.

safe, I'm safe
I know he's looking I can feel it

turn my head, see a tree
he's under it, clearly it's him, smiling
I did it.
"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    this actually happened to me.. :o

    I don't know how clear and understandable that description of the incident is though.

    I was taking a walk and decided to follow these little paths.. then the path I was following turned around this sort of a tiny hill. I was by the edge of a river, the place was so peaceful, birds were singing and I was happy it's springtime. then I saw the tree. one of the branches was almost ripped off. and it was no small branch, it must've taken a lot of strenght to do damage like that to it. then I "saw", in my head, an image of a young man, furious, ripping the branch just to destroy something. I felt like something was wrong. suddenly the place totally freaked me out!
    I started backing away along the path I had followed earlier and I just thought, "something's wrong, I can't run or he'll see me, I need to get away!"
    somehow I thought that if I could only get to this particular tree I'd be safe so i hurried there.. then I turned around and saw an another tree next to the path and.. well, he might have been there or he might have not been there. I just think I saw someone.

    this must make me sound like I'm crazy but I was really frightened I can't fully explain it all but..
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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