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what's wrong?

eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
edited May 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm not feeling okay

I've finished shcool
// a party ahead
// no more homework
// I'm free to decide
I have a job
// commitment
// money
// nice atmosphere
I have a job opportunity
// commitment
// responsibility

everything's great
nice
shining
smiling
thinking
crying

I'm not feeling okay

saw my father
seeing my friends
planning my trip
// excited
// nervous

and still I'm not feeling okay

where's the summer
where's the sun
where's the warm breeze on my face
on my face?

I turn my face up
I'm facing the sun
seeing the sky
"how I choose to feel is how I am"

I choose life
I choose happiness
I choose a smile
I choose laughter

and yet,
still,
I'm not feeling okay
"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    codedbrandedlabelled wrote:
    not feeling okay: that's okay

    thank you. :o:)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • danielheyesdanielheyes Posts: 362
    eMMI wrote:
    I'm not feeling okay

    I've finished shcool
    // a party ahead
    // no more homework
    // I'm free to decide
    I have a job
    // commitment
    // money
    // nice atmosphere
    I have a job opportunity
    // commitment
    // responsibility

    everything's great
    nice
    shining
    smiling
    thinking
    crying

    I'm not feeling okay

    saw my father
    seeing my friends
    planning my trip
    // excited
    // nervous

    and still I'm not feeling okay

    where's the summer
    where's the sun
    where's the warm breeze on my face
    on my face?

    I turn my face up
    I'm facing the sun
    seeing the sky
    "how I choose to feel is how I am"

    I choose life
    I choose happiness
    I choose a smile
    I choose laughter

    and yet,
    still,
    I'm not feeling okay

    I reckon that would go nice to some acoustic guitar and stuff like that,nice little ballad!
    When I was born, the doctor came out to the waiting room and said to my father, I'm very sorry. We did everything we could. But he pulled through......
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    danielheyes wrote:
    I reckon that would go nice to some acoustic guitar and stuff like that,nice little ballad!

    you think? well why don't you go ahead and compose? :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • danielheyesdanielheyes Posts: 362
    eMMI wrote:
    you think? well why don't you go ahead and compose? :)

    well i might just do that missy!!
    you watch this space!
    When I was born, the doctor came out to the waiting room and said to my father, I'm very sorry. We did everything we could. But he pulled through......
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    danielheyes wrote:
    well i might just do that missy!!
    you watch this space!

    well, you just go ahead then Danny'o!!
    watch this space? :confused: ah well, sure. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    eMMI-lou!!!! :) Some days, huh? Doesn't matter how "right" everything is when deep down, you just don't feel it. Must be PMS. ;):p
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    eMMI-lou!!!! :) Some days, huh? Doesn't matter how "right" everything is when deep down, you just don't feel it. Must be PMS. ;):p

    hey hey BE my dear!! :):)

    have you not been around or have I just been blind to your posts? :D


    some days indeed! :rolleyes: I'm feeling a lot better now though. :)
    ah BE, such mighty fine words. :D:D:):D
    lol, I ruled that option out. ;) but how nice of you to bring it up. :p tee hee, there's nothing a little chocolate and Hanson can't heal. :p;):D
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    eMMI-lou!!!! :) Some days, huh? Doesn't matter how "right" everything is when deep down, you just don't feel it. Must be PMS. ;):p

    Yeah, that old PMS is the cause of most of my worst cranky moods!! :D

    And it took me so many years to figure it out!! :p
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    justam wrote:
    Yeah, that old PMS is the cause of most of my worst cranky moods!! :D

    And it took me so many years to figure it out!! :p

    lol. how come you couldn't figure it out? :p

    yeah, I get cranky too but this time it wasn't PMS, I don't know what it was but I'm glad it's over! :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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