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I could

eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
edited February 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I could run down the streets
I could climb every mountain -
the sun is up
it's a brand new day!
don't be afraid, there's still time
for our children to play

I could chase away the clouds
I could bring out the stars
for you only
don't push me away, I still care
hearts should never break (should they?)

I could spread my wings
I could do anything
though sometimes it's hard
but I'm strong, there's still life in me
I know I'm not smiling in vain
"Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    whoa.. it's been a while since I've last posted anything here.. or written anything for that matter.

    this just kinda "came to me" last night just as I was falling asleep.. first I couldn't be arsed to get out some paper and a pen but then I figured I'd be well upset in the morning so I just had to turn on the light.. :rolleyes: :D

    lol. and I don't know if it's any good either. but somehow it's kinda appealing to me.


    I dunno if the pieces work together.. or should they be separated - do they make any sense like that..?


    :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • ByrnzieByrnzie Posts: 21,037
    I like it! :)
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Byrnzie wrote:
    I like it! :)

    hehe. why thank you. :)

    lol. seems like you're the only one. :o:D
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
    I also like it. Simple and to the point.
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Perceptual wrote:
    I also like it. Simple and to the point.

    thank you aswell then. :):)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • Irish AlIrish Al Posts: 6,236
    Yeah I really like it, you capture real emotions that everone goes through at some stage....well done, gold star for emmi :D
    I need a coffee!
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Irish Al wrote:
    Yeah I really like it, you capture real emotions that everone goes through at some stage....well done, gold star for emmi :D

    oh thank you. :) I appreciate that.

    ooo, a gold star!?! yey!! :D:D
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    good stuff sis!

    we want more. :)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    rarghrargh-brownstar wrote:
    good stuff sis!

    we want more. :)

    thank you a million times!! there's more out there.. :o but I haven't written anything new in a while actually. too busy, too.. I don't know.

    but I'm working on it. ;):D
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • marker_in_the_sandmarker_in_the_sand Posts: 272
    I like it alot.
    I'm always in for concepts like this:)

    EDIT: I meant the ''I Could" thing by the way
    I don't want to be the fool that's behind me but I am...

    I'll Hold The Pain... Release...

    Yourself
  • marker_in_the_sandmarker_in_the_sand Posts: 272
    I don't know... but somehow I just editted that post of mine... huh??
    I don't want to be the fool that's behind me but I am...

    I'll Hold The Pain... Release...

    Yourself
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) eMMI-lou, I could enjoy this sunshine all day! You're definitely not smiling in vain. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    :) eMMI-lou, I could enjoy this sunshine all day! You're definitely not smiling in vain. :)


    ooohhhhhh!!!!!! lovely BE!!!! :)



    it's been a looonng time since I've seen you around. :o maybe I just went partially blind for a moment?


    *hugggsssss*



    thank you for your words also. :D
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    marker_in_the_sand wrote:
    I like it alot.
    I'm always in for concepts like this:)

    EDIT: I meant the ''I Could" thing by the way

    :)



    ooh, nice by-accident-editing! :eek: :D
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
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