Not your typical love story

twin2twin2 Posts: 894
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Ugly girl and ugly boy
not your typical love story
Both dysfunctional as can be
neither a pretty sight to see

Living in their tainted land
walking the crooked road hand in hand
Not the vision of the ultimate couple
but have made it through all kinds of trouble

Crimes committed, on the run
just their idea of fun
Ugly girl and ugly boy
not your typical love story
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  • another great poem twin. You have really been telling stories with your writings of late. Always great, Uber of late
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    another great poem twin. You have really been telling stories with your writings of late. Always great, Uber of late


    I try to. Some are based strictly on feelings of the heart an others are things I feel very strongly about. The one above was just being silly. What does "Uber" mean??
  • uber means, oh crap, my phone....I'll tell you later.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    uber means, oh crap, my phone....I'll tell you later.


    I'm still waiting......
  • now I cant just tell ya that. B.E. might be able to help.

    being Uber is a-ight
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    now I cant just tell ya that. B.E. might be able to help.

    being Uber is a-ight

    You enjoy being difficult don't you?
  • Not at all. its just the way I am

    Post Script.....figure out that other poem?
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Post Script.....figure out that other poem?


    Yes I did but I'm not going to tell you my answer.
  • LOL, good stuff
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    LOL, good stuff


    Gotcha! Didn't I?
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