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Being Alive

twin2twin2 Posts: 894
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Please listen to what I say,
I could teach you a thing or two.
About this world we live in,
that paves a path for you.

Hold on tight to those you love,
and know it's always enough.
Breathe the air and taste the rain,
enjoy the good times and learn from the pain.

Lend your hand to all who need help,
and love, and love, including yourself.
Material things are meaningless and beauty fades away,
peace is a prize at the end of the day.

Don't get caught up in addictions,
or waste time on fake predictions.
Offer kisses and hugs,
holding hands and falling in love.

Live for the moment, cause that's all you really have,
life is not eternal, but this moment you can grab.
Feel it with all you have inside,
enjoy the gift of being alive!
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  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    A positive, uplifting poem with superb advice. Well done, 'ol chap.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    twin2 wrote:
    Offer kisses and hugs,
    holding hands and falling in love.


    I love this part!!!!!:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Thanks for the observation "Nothingbetter". By the way, I am a female!!!
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    'ol chapette ;)

    It was just an expression. Didn't really mean it in a male or female type of context. Being goofy with the proper English :)
    Kansas City 6/12/03 ** Kissimmee 10/9/04 ** Atlantic City 10/1/05 ** Denver 7/2/06 ** Denver 7/3/06 ** Chicago 8/23/09 ** Chicago 8/24/09 ** Kansas City 5/3/10 ** Dallas 11/15/13 ** Oklahoma City 11/16/13 ** St. Louis 10/3/14 ** Tulsa 10/8/14 ** Chicago - Wrigley Field 8/20/16 ** Chicago - Wrigley Field 8/22/16 ** Oklahoma City 9/20/22 ** Ft. Worth 9/15/23

    EV - St. Louis 7/1/11 ** Tulsa 11/19/12
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    Please listen to what I say,
    I could teach you a thing or two.
    About this world we live in,
    that paves a path for you.

    Hold on tight to those you love,
    and know it's always enough.
    Breathe the air and taste the rain,
    enjoy the good times and learn from the pain.

    Lend your hand to all who need help,
    and love, and love, including yourself.
    Material things are meaningless and beauty fades away,
    peace is a prize at the end of the day.

    Don't get caught up in addictions,
    or waste time on fake predictions.
    Offer kisses and hugs,
    holding hands and falling in love.

    Live for the moment, cause that's all you really have,
    life is not eternal, but this moment you can grab.
    Feel it with all you have inside,
    enjoy the gift of being alive!

    good advice, well phrased.....thanks I feel better for having read that :)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Spook FishSpook Fish Posts: 241
    i really like this one, well done.

    this is great:

    Lend your hand to all who need help,
    and love, and love, including yourself.
    Material things are meaningless and beauty fades away,
    peace is a prize at the end of the day.
    Dont take drugs and be a loser
    wear a pink shirt and go down the boozer
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