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Paradise

twin2twin2 Posts: 894
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Exotic
Erotic
Paradise
You're a cool breeze
What a tease
Faint laughter
Ever after
All to share.....in paradise

Flirting eyes
Making passes
Behind your disguise
I'll let you take the lead
Fulfill this aching need
And lead me into....paradise
Lead me into...paradise

Exotic
Erotic
Paradise

Cool breeze
What a tease
Paradise
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    nice vision of aching paradise.

    I like.....:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

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  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    This is beautiful!! I really like it. It paints a clear ocean with waves crashing for me...
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    it's the human story - it's great.......we are savages in sex and love......it's amazing that civilization has happened.......we are but savages.......and this poem really captures that wild crazy heady loving sex feeling.......we're animals!!!!!! yipppeeeee!!!!!!
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