The View

twin2twin2 Posts: 894
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Fragile is the view I can give you,
strength is what you give back to me.
Limited like a girl in a bubble,
just longing to be free.

Eyes that see shades in a haze,
but long to paint with bold, bright strokes.
Always reaching for the impossible,
with a death grip on a sparkle of hope.

I wish for just a little while,
that I could see what you see with those eyes.
Just a different point of view.
Just something strong and new.

Not limited to be,
the fragile inside of me.
A world with no boundaries,
a world to spread your wings and fly free...
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Comments

  • KovoKovo Posts: 255
    A brighter view would be nice. The poems I've read that you've written are all written well. Keep it up.
    I shouldn't have to fight a battle I'll never win, just to lose those I've never had.
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Thanks for the compliment. My view isn't always that bad.
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