You Said
twin2
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You take it to the limit,
and push against the restraints.
Over time your point will be proven,
and their memories will be stained.
The dam will overflow,
come crashing on their heads.
Drowning with surprise,
they will remember what you've said.
They will live with regret,
and remember what you said.
They will wish the clocks reset,
and remember what you said.
When they're lying alone in their beds,
it will continue swimming in their heads.
And they can't help but remembering,
remembering what you said.
and push against the restraints.
Over time your point will be proven,
and their memories will be stained.
The dam will overflow,
come crashing on their heads.
Drowning with surprise,
they will remember what you've said.
They will live with regret,
and remember what you said.
They will wish the clocks reset,
and remember what you said.
When they're lying alone in their beds,
it will continue swimming in their heads.
And they can't help but remembering,
remembering what you said.
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I really like this.
anyhoo - on topic - i really like this line...
drowning with surprise
it sounds both good and bad simultaneously to me, kinda like most of the stuff in life.
Let's just breathe...
I am myself like you somehow
it will continue swimming in their heads.
And they can't help but remembering,
remembering what you said.
I like these lines.
when I think about them, I'm 'they' and they're 'you'.
was that understandable?
I always think about the things people have said to me. I'm wondering things like, "why did he say it like THAT?" and so on.
but all in all, the poem is great.
it has a twin2 quality promise.
oh, I'm not making any sense now. it's 03:45 AM here and I have to stay up til 07:00 AM!
A "twin2 quality promise" eh? That's funny. Thanks!
yup.
you're welcome! hopefully tomorrow when I wake up and read that post again, I'll still remember what I ment by that.
no, just joking, of course I will! I mean that your poems are always good!
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
Thanks for the compliment. That really is a nice thing to say.
you are very welcome.
what can I say, I'm a nice person!
no, seriously, you're welcome!