Soaring

twin2
twin2 Posts: 894
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm getting a lot out of it.
Just the feeling is starting to fit.
Not too large,
and not too small.
Just right....in between it all.
You can soar with my wings today.
Just spread them and fly away.
I'm getting a lot out of this,
like the gentle sharing of a kiss.
And nothing that I even miss.
You can soar with my wings today.
Just spread them and fly away........
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  • decides2dream
    decides2dream Posts: 14,977
    i like it.

    i also could definitely use your wings to soar on, so thanks for those words. ;)

    btw i *heart* this line...


    like the gentle sharing of a kiss.




    *melts*
    good stuff, lovely imagery.
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    Thank you!
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    You can soar with my wings today.
    Just spread them and fly away.

    amazing lines! :)
    truly beautiful!
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    Thank you for the kind words.
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    twin2 wrote:
    Thank you for the kind words.

    you're welcome.
    I really like this poem, read it through many times.
    and now I'm gonna read it again! ;)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • lovin kind
    lovin kind Posts: 268
    sweet writing
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    lovin kind wrote:
    sweet writing

    Thanks for the compliment!
  • coachchris
    coachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    Amazing. I just read your other poem and was all depressed and now I have a smile again. Thank you...
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    coachchris wrote:
    Amazing. I just read your other poem and was all depressed and now I have a smile again. Thank you...

    You are welcome.

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