Truth

twin2
twin2 Posts: 894
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Is faith like a piece of glass?
Too delicate to really last?
Is it all worth believing?
Too many people have been deceiving.

Hard not to trust.......much harder to trust,
like an old, abandoned house....need to sweep out the dust.
It's not in my nature to be so cold for so long.
Tear down the deceipt and rebuild the house strong.

Good sturdy material, to last a lifetime or two,
Justice, compassion.....and the truth.
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  • coachchris
    coachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    I continue to be amazed with how talented people are on this board. Thanks for sharing.
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    Thank you for the kind words.
  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    I read your poem 4 times...It reads soo smooth and beautiful...
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    Thanks poet.
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    I don't actually know what to say.
    this one was really good.
    it left me.. in awe I guess. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    You people are too kind..really. Thanks.
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    twin2 wrote:
    You people are too kind..really. Thanks.

    oh you silly you! :)
    we could never be TOO KIND to you.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    as they say in uber land, that was a gooder
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    depopulationINC wrote:
    as they say in uber land, that was a gooder


    What is "uber"? I never did figure it out.

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