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twin2twin2 Posts: 894
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Watching the world
behind rose tinted eyes
Speaking words
from a toothless smile
Tasting pleasures
forbidden to society
Live by your own laws
cause you know you are free
Hip to your culture
and open to change
Have all the answers
but forget all the names
Dance to your own visions
seek out your own fun
Live life to it's fullest
and don't have to answer to anyone
Watching the world
behind aqua colored eyes
Speaking in riddles
cause that's just your style
Will do your thing and model the clay
spiritual awakening until the day fades away
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    right on sis....:D

    Is he single and free or what?
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Very nice...do I know him??? :o))
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Ali wrote:
    right on sis....:D

    Is he single and free or what?

    lol! I don't know. I had the coolest picture in my head of this guy and I think my title sucked for this one, but he was a fun imagination. I'm sure there is a real one out there somewhere.
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    twin1 wrote:
    Very nice...do I know him??? :o))

    Not unless he lives in your imagination too. Are the wonder twin powers working?
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    wonder twin powers - deactivate...form of a magician to poof that guy into reality... :o))
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Sisters twin, you guys are so silly funny!! I love it!!! :D I liked your poem too, twin2. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Ali wrote:
    right on sis....:D

    Is he single and free or what?

    you like men with no teeth?


    nice poem twin2
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Thanks BE.

    pacifier-if you think about it, sometimes people smile without showing their teeth, so that can also be considered a toothless smile in a way.
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    twin2 wrote:
    Thanks BE.

    pacifier-if you think about it, sometimes people smile without showing their teeth, so that can also be considered a toothless smile in a way.

    I know, I figured that :) was just being silly, cos on first read i thought it meant toothless
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    I know, I figured that :) was just being silly, cos on first read i thought it meant toothless


    loving this board tonight

    nice poem
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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