A song i wrote

EvvoEvvo Posts: 195
This is called Paper Planes. let me know what you think of it. hear it with my band at http://www.myspace.com/band3way
musically it is my yellow ledbetter tribute

Paper Planes, they don't fly everytime,
And their creators, they ask themselves why.
Are we so, hopelessly bound to the things we can't control,
Seeming easier but the cracks - they still show

Our time - will still go.

Paper Planes, they can burn before your eyes,
Eyes on a target, target I despise.
And it goes, round and round to where it all began.
There's times we got nothing, nothing for our plans

Chorus:
I know who I am, don't forget to remember,
Time goes one way and I don't wanna fail forever.
Pay the price if you don't pull yourself together,
Time goes one way, and I don't wanna live forever.

Paper Planes, they need repair after a while.
Been here before and still I put myself on trial.
And I hear "There's nothing wrong with going wrong, sometimes"
Drifting to a thankless sleep as the bells chime.

Chorus

If i knew where i was going, I'd be there by now
If i knew where i'd been, I'd get back there somehow
If i knew where i was going, I'd be there by now
If i knew where i'm going, I'd be long gone by now.

Chorus

Paper Planes, they can fly everytime you try,
All your greatest critics, they're forced into a smile
And if we, still cling on to all we need to dream
One way, you'll get everything you need.
Post edited by Unknown User on

Comments

  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    pritty good tune.
    which sound are you?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • EvvoEvvo Posts: 195
    sound as in on the song?? main riff, chords and the second solo etc.

    if you mean generally - forgive the cliche but we do have a wide sound. check us out.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    yea i meant you personaly.
    now i know youre the guitar.
    nice.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    theres only one place i would go and thats heaven
    maybe thats what your saying here

    nice art
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
Sign In or Register to comment.