Blue Border(Hunger Strike Tag)

Subsonic

This is a song by my band called Blue Border that we recently played live with a Hunger Strike tag....be interested in some opinions.Here's the link to the video and the lyrics are below...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MQ8j9EWqn74


[Blue Border]

Eyes are turning grey
All those pictures fade away
Cant stand in line for something
That ill never give away
Soul is worn and hungry
And The Ice is wearing thin
Watch you there beneath me
Trying hard just to get back in

Blue Border On My Soul
Blue Water Fills My Room

Try to see whats missing
All the scratches on my face
Try to be a river
Wash the memories away
Hands are cold and weary
And the blood is wearing thin
I believed the stories
That were told to me back then

Blue Border On My Soul
Blue Water Fills My Room

Does it make a difference?
Can you make amends?