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Poor me a Drink

midnight tunesmidnight tunes Posts: 96
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
You were here
now gone
Wasted time?
my heart says no
I will leave you alone
and fake my way through this test
which led me to
confess
that I was obsessed
And request that the
bartender pour me
a drink
so I don't have to think.....
of the sorrow
He said,
"Look to the future,...
Atleast you can eat onions again"
love is free
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I liked the rhymes in this one AND love the last line! I know the poem has a sad feel but that line makes me smile. :) I've said something similar to a pal of mine, 'cept I said garlic instead of onions. Hope we see more from ya! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • BinFrogBinFrog Posts: 7,309
    I know it's unintentional, but the typo in the title of the thread adds to the feeling of the poem.
    Bright eyed kid: "Wow Typo Man, you're the best!"
    Typo Man: "Thanks kidz, but remembir, stay in skool!"
  • midnight tunesmidnight tunes Posts: 96
    it is actually my way of explaining, ha, ha

    poor me, poor me, pour me another drink :)
    love is free
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    midnight tunes wrote:
    it is actually my way of explaining, ha, ha

    poor me, poor me, pour me another drink :)

    I got it. It's a saying I've heard a time or two.
    .........................................................................
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