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Gray Day

midnight tunesmidnight tunes Posts: 96
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Am I too forward
too demanding
too confusing
too ugly
too harsh
too critical
too hateful
...to be loved

shadows hover over all that is good

part of the day is gray,
part of the day is blue,
honestly, seconds in between
willingness opened the door of her heart
love is free
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I like this. I don't believe anyone is unloveable unless they choose to be.
  • trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
    and even if they choose to be.. (unloved)... sometimes there is the ONE that will still knock you off your feet!
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    trinityeliza wrote:
    and even if they choose to be.. (unloved)... sometimes there is the ONE that will still knock you off your feet!


    You do have a point there.
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    I really liked the ending....
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    trinityeliza wrote:
    and even if they choose to be.. (unloved)... sometimes there is the ONE that will still knock you off your feet!

    fate is unstoppable, what with its undying will and all
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    a poet wrote:
    I really liked the ending....

    Here, here! Me too! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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