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From a young girl's journal...

jammergurljammergurl Posts: 33
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
My little sister wrote this...it is short, but I think it is quite powerful:

If I could be anything,
I would be your tears....
be born in your eyes...live on your cheeks and die on your lips.
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I am myself........like you some how.........(Release)
~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~
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  • lovelyritalovelyrita Posts: 72
    wow...she wrote that?


    that is very beautiful.
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Cool. I really like that. How old is she, or was she when she wrote this?
  • Spook FishSpook Fish Posts: 241
    She has wisdom beyond her years. great lines.
    Dont take drugs and be a loser
    wear a pink shirt and go down the boozer
  • illegal pantsillegal pants Posts: 13,471
    just wow

    :)
    wah
  • bohemianutopistbohemianutopist Posts: 123
    sorry if i'm being rude, but i don't think she wrote that. i've heard that poem/quote many times in the past. check google, it's all over the place.
    this board is too crazy for me these days...
  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    oh, i don't know.

    i think if she put pencil, pen, crayon, feather, brushes, fingertips, what else? . . .

    to paper, papyrus, cave walls, sidewalks, trains, etc

    then it's pretty safe to say

    by definition

    she wrote it.

    it's lovely

    sort of like

    i know it's been said before

    but

    all you need is love
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    pearlmutt wrote:

    all you need is love

    Rabindranath Tagore said that.
  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    and some other folks too.

    lovely poems, lovely!
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