Said or So

Spook Fish

I dont want to know
if its said or so
That your with another man
Just a little girl
In her tiny world
You aint gonna play with me no more


All you do is run around, and make a mess ]
I'm done trying, so done trying my best ]


I can feel the change
I see now your deranged
Some say your all the same
Just a little girl
In her tiny world
So glad i showed you the door


All you do is run around, and make a mess ]
I'm done trying, so done trying my best ]

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Squidge

Hi Spook,

That's nice man, is it a song or...?

Interesting rhyming pattern, were you going for that or did it just happen?

Spook Fish

Hey Squidge,

all mine are songs.
i was going for the rhyming thing.

some ive done dont but its quite good to get rhymes in if you can.

Squidge

Spook Fish wrote:

Hey Squidge,

all mine are songs.
i was going for the rhyming thing.

some ive done dont but its quite good to get rhymes in if you can.

I always have to rhyme, more for my benefit than any other...i would get confused and would probably have to be a much better musician to write one without rhymes.

Good going kidda!

Nothingbetter

I could feel the flow right off the bat, and it does make for nice lyrics to a song. I'm sure it would be easy to put music with. Well done.