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Your Modesty

Spook FishSpook Fish Posts: 241
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Caught it looking at me
your modesty
comes naturally
cant, take it's gaze from me, and it's
so nice to see

I love your way,
the way you swing and you sway
and at the end of the day
all is sweet, and I, feel white heat,
but it's, sweet unique now,

get down,
you said it once, now get down
Goody 2 shoe times, get down
oh wont you please get down

it takes a minute to get in it and a second to reckon it's good
in an hour it be sour but you'd be there all night if you could
it takes a minute to get in it and a second to reckon it's good
in an hour it be sour but you'd be there all night if you could
Dont take drugs and be a loser
wear a pink shirt and go down the boozer
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    that's cool.....I approve, I applaud.....hehehehe etc. :)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I like it.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    it's so sexy......he's so sexy as a poet....and that's it, it's sexy
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    Is it more for lyrics, or a poem? This one seems like it could be lyrics as well. I like it....nice movement to it.
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  • Spook FishSpook Fish Posts: 241
    Nothingbetter wrote:
    Is it more for lyrics, or a poem? This one seems like it could be lyrics as well. I like it....nice movement to it.

    yes, these are Lyrics from songs I've composed with Acoustic Guitar.

    cheers.
    Dont take drugs and be a loser
    wear a pink shirt and go down the boozer
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    It's fun and I could just imagine that last verse spoken in a hushed, sexy voice, kinda like Robbie Robertson from that tune "Somewhere Down The Crazy River"---
    "Wait, did you hear that?
    Oh this is sure stirring up some ghosts for me
    She said "There's one thing you've got to learn
    is not to be afraid of it."
    I said "No, I like it, I like it, it's good."
    She said "You like it now
    But you'll learn to love it later."
    Did you hear that? Ahhh, this is sure stirring up some ghosts for me" :)

    Me likey!!!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    Spook Fish wrote:
    yes, these are Lyrics from songs I've composed with Acoustic Guitar.

    cheers.

    Awesome. It would be cool to hear :)
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