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Spook FishSpook Fish Posts: 241
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Acid Burn
In your chest
I am a wave
You are the crest

Spin like cogs
The vast machine
I am dirty
You are pristine

Dreams surreal
Death denial
I am face
You are the smile

Have no Instincts
Think deeper than most
I am reborn
You are my host
Dont take drugs and be a loser
wear a pink shirt and go down the boozer
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Hey Sppok Fish! This reads really well and has really cool rhymes, I'm diggin'! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    I love this one...it's the one I like the most of all your work that I've seen.

    The last two lines...

    I am reborn
    You are my host

    is very intense. Way cool!
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