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Broken

gmdishgmdish Posts: 26
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Standing in the line ofmen who've loved and lost
staring hollow eyed broken is the cost
hard to carry on,cant see the other side
cant feel the suns embrace
no changing in the tide
given to fly
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  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Posts: 570
    It's very short, but powerful. Such imagery to go with the sadness it projects.
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  • Countess Elizabeth BCountess Elizabeth B Posts: 10
    The more I'm reading the forums here, the more I am convinced that so many -- too many -- of us are in the same boat.
    "Suck my blood and fuck my soul..."
    Cradle of Filth

    "I see hell in your eyes
    Taken in by surprise
    Taking you makes me feel alive
    Touching you makes me die."
    Vampire Lestat
  • gmdishgmdish Posts: 26
    I think your right Countess
    given to fly
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    sorry i tried to run you over
    in my truck
    but i woke up feeling sick again
    and man it definitely sucked
    i feel bad and its brand new again
    i just want to be your friend
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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