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spearleafspearleaf Posts: 7
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
awake, the sea arose
sold the sand for love
at all cost,
murals across the mountain side
sell my love for food,
break the tools
live like fools
sold my blood for sand
all that i had is loss
once my blood
twice the sand
broken lies
all once said
once one told
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Comments

  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Beautiful. Really- very beautiful throughout. Please continue to post more.
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    I really like this. keep it up! :)
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I like the rythym! Good stuff, do keep it up. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • spearleafspearleaf Posts: 7
    thanks for your comments. ill continue to post more.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Very well done...

    LOve IT!!!!!!:):):):):):):):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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