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The Wren

somebodythepsychicsomebodythepsychic Posts: 40
edited June 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Parallel universes explained and destroyed

Coming together out of the void

Consciousness in beyond technology


Consciousness of now

Spirit of then

My consciousness

Spirit of wren
Consciousness is Power
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    metronomically, cadentially speaking... this reminds me of Army of Me


    nice :)
  • somebodythepsychicsomebodythepsychic Posts: 40
    I like the way it drives to the end and wraps up neatly
    Consciousness is Power
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    absolutely.

    the whole notion of a wren's spirit is intruiging, and definitely poetry stuff.

    what's this whole first verse about? I mean, I get what you're saying. What's your inspiration, if I may?
  • Astral StarAstral Star Posts: 129
    This speaks volumes yet is written so simplistically. Reminds me of Zen poetry. The never ending birth and rebirth cycle (and not just on earth), of experince and a reminder we are all a part of each other and everything in all time and space. Beautiful.

    BTW - have you ever read about the Brane Theory? Just curious ;)
    "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
  • somebodythepsychicsomebodythepsychic Posts: 40
    PastaNazi and Astral Star

    Thinking about parallel universes inspired the first part. The word IN should be IS. Consciousness IS beyond technology. The Borg inspired it also.

    In Japanese culture wrens are considered to be psychic. I find the poem to be Zen-like as well.

    In college I lived with a Japanese family which explains the Japanese influence.

    No to the Brane Theory question.
    Consciousness is Power
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Good stuff.
    Is thinking as powerful as feeling?
    Think about our consciousness inside/outside this universe
    and other universes.
    Or.
    Feel about our consciousness inside/outside this universe
    and other universes.
    Or.
    Our consciousness thinks/feels it is in this universe/universes
    as-well as it is not in this universe/universes.
    Or.
    Our consciousness/unconsciousness is all universes thinking/feeling.
    Or.
    Maybe I am nuts and shouldn't post this.
    Our universe asked me to type this out.(Submit Replay)
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • somebodythepsychicsomebodythepsychic Posts: 40
    Equal

    Too many ideas to respond to so I'll give you my thoughts

    The universe is made of our collective consciousnesses. We made it together
    The universe is the infinite

    Thinking creates feeling and vice versa

    You're not nuts. Just thoughtful

    Thoughts in the post are good for concentration. 'Nuff said. You know the rest
    Consciousness is Power
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    somebodythepsychic wrote:
    Equal

    Too many ideas to respond to so I'll give you my thoughts

    The universe is made of our collective consciousnesses. We made it together
    The universe is the infinite

    Thinking creates feeling and vice versa

    You're not nuts. Just thoughtful

    Thoughts in the post are good for concentration. 'Nuff said. You know the rest

    World=as in Word.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • somebodythepsychicsomebodythepsychic Posts: 40
    Where did you learn philosophy?

    Have you read NothingBetter's "The Windmill" or "Misty Eyed Statue?"

    They're what inspired me to post.
    Consciousness is Power
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