She

stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Clean, serene, polished.

She embodied perfection.

Too perfect, perhaps, to be touched by anyone.

Admired, loved.

Though she felt seemingly unloved.

Inside.. the reverse of what appeared on the surface.

Shattered.

Broken, even.

A mess.

A past, so well hidden, that it only came about after her demise.

Dirtied.

Here, yet in an instant gone.

Vanished.

Are we still to flourish?

Or should we crumble with her –

destroyed by the mess she’s left behind.
I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
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  • stoneygali wrote:
    Clean, serene, polished.

    She embodied perfection.

    Too perfect, perhaps, to be touched by anyone.

    Admired, loved.

    Though she felt seemingly unloved.

    Inside.. the reverse of what appeared on the surface.

    Shattered.

    Broken, even.

    A mess.

    A past, so well hidden, that it only came about after her demise.

    Dirtied.

    Here, yet in an instant gone.

    Vanished.

    Are we still to flourish?

    Or should we crumble with her –

    destroyed by the mess she’s left behind.


    WOW, fantastic...I really felt this one...the way she kind looked good on the outside but felt so tainted. That we see her perfection was only a mask once she was gone.

    I would love to here a piece about that secret of hers, but at the same time, I guess I like wondering
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    dirtied,destroyed.
    left a mess from political corruption
    of the enemy built upon politics.
    she laughed when she was raped,
    she cried when lives were taken.
    Where does that lead
    the children of God
    when in the ruin of their enemies?

    Heaven abounds.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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