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stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Dusk-hazed evening - the blush of night slowly begins
As you traipse through wond'rous evergreen forest ends
Grappling with every step - struggling to find way
You notice the sun setting..and the loss of day

Rhythmed-beating drum begins pounding in your head
You are off on a quest from something that she said
Wanting in passion - the tempo becomes more clear
You close eyes and search for that music you must hear

There in the sweet meadow's edge right near the tree line
You find the source of sound over there by the pine
Trembling you watch mesmerized by her once again
Youve found her there -- under the guise of evening wind

She is lilting there and swaying to her soul's calling
Lost in echoing drumbeat of sunset falling
She moves to its cadence = she breathes in lustful tune
You succomb to her dance as sky gives way to moon

Her eyes open and she realizes you are there
Your eyes lock into a wanting and knowing stare
She slows her movement and then beckons you forward
And you draw nearer your soul's march going onward

Magnetic urge draws you into her world of dance
And you surrender to edge of her lucid trance
Fires rise within... lighting pathway to her essence
Basking in togetherness of such fused presence

She gazes at you and invites with longing eyes
To watch as she sways to movement of spellbound guise
She tempts you with her hunger - you're lost in yearning
And once again you're there...soul candles start burning
I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
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  • I'd like to get some "soul candles"

    nice poem Stoneygal
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    I'd like to get some "soul candles"

    nice poem Stoneygal


    you already do dear

    you set mine ablaze
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • matches?
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    matches?


    nope, it's more like you simply walked by and all of them lit by an unseen presence... as ya passed by... the wicks began to burn. the flames are too strong now to be extiguished honey.
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    heh heh....

    Nice poetry, baby!

    Nice!!!!
    Feels Good Inc.
  • stoneygali wrote:
    nope, it's more like you simply walked by and all of them lit by an unseen presence... as ya passed by... the wicks began to burn. the flames are too strong now to be extiguished honey.

    well I'd be last one to pull out a fire extinguisher, yet a hose comes to mind ;)
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    well I'd be last one to pull out a fire extinguisher, yet a hose comes to mind ;)

    uugghhhh!!! typical male testoterone bullshit talk :P A hose?!? :O LMAO Man, next time ya wanna talk about what you refer to as your hose,... leave me out.... that's just as bad as you writing about busting a nut :( ICK!!!!
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • I thought is was witty! :D

    oh well, I'll ring the Dong Bell
    go to hell
    screw a pigeon
    and discover a new religion :)
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    I thought is was witty! :D

    oh well, I'll ring the Dong Bell
    go to hell
    screw a pigeon
    and discover a new religion :)


    did you take some weird meds last nite dear??? silly boy.
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
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