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stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
edited October 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
From Majestic Mountain height...
way beyond the clouds;
you plummet and plunge
in a mighty roar.
Cascading
foaming,
frothing
Spewing icy spray
from deep chasms
where you percolate
and boil.
Surging and racing
through my blood.
My heart beats
a savage tattoo
to the rhythm of
your awesome crescendo.
Alive
Vital
Energized
I am the dynamo
through which you flow
I harness the primal power
at your core
and release the quieted remains
to trickle to tranquil lakes
far below.
I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    stoneygali wrote:
    From Majestic Mountain height...
    way beyond the clouds;
    you plummet and plunge
    in a mighty roar.
    Cascading
    foaming,
    frothing
    Spewing icy spray
    from deep chasms
    where you percolate
    and boil.
    Surging and racing
    through my blood.
    My heart beats
    a savage tattoo
    to the rhythm of
    your awesome crescendo.
    Alive
    Vital
    Energized
    I am the dynamo
    through which you flow
    I harness the primal power
    at your core
    and release the quieted remains
    to trickle to tranquil lakes
    far below.
    NICE.VERY MASCULINE AND POWERFUL....
    U MUST B IN LOVE:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali wrote:
    NICE.VERY MASCULINE AND POWERFUL....
    U MUST B IN LOVE:)


    i was hoping for it to be less masculine and more powerful.
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • fire to ice ~ so quickly, too?
    you must be a dream, perhaps?
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