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Beneath the Sky

stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I lie motionless
Staring into the night that dances around me
Sleepless again
It's your fault
How dare you be so pleasing to the mind
Effortlessly maintaining pleasures and delights
To which I am now accustomed
It rains
Beads of you wash over me
Not to cleanse, but to taint
Drenched in you, I am impure
I lie like a slain thing
Beads gushing over me
Floating...in a pool of you
I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
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  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    I've felt the same way, sometimes. You put it all down in writing very well.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    I like it too.
    Read it yesterday already, but I was too tired to reply :p
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    Thank you Bu2 & Jamal. I'm just flattered that you even took the time to read some of my words. I feel, I guess, welcome here :) Silly I know, but thank you.
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
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