Fireflies

stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
These captured moments like fireflies
Lay strewn across my mind
Glowing embers of melted sighs
Are what you leave behind

Words are not enough here
To recount your effect on me
Treasured soul-meshed times
Whimsical waves in drowning sea

Musical love, rhythmed heartbeats
Shadows fade to crisp light
You asked for a cloud to soften
Making picture just right

Weaving words, blending oils
Painter and poet share our dreams
Offered love ... gift of all
Whilst we float and drift in beams

These captured moments like fireflies
Lay strewn across my mind
Glowing embers of melted sighs
Are what you leave behind...
I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
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  • beautiful poem Stoneygal!

    I love fireflies

    and this line

    "Glowing embers of melted sighs
    Are what you leave behind..."
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    beautiful poem Stoneygal!

    I love fireflies

    and this line

    "Glowing embers of melted sighs
    Are what you leave behind..."

    me too :)

    glad you're enjoying what you've inspired.
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • there's a song by the band the Drams
    called fireflies

    I'll have to type all the lyrics later...

    appreciate the fireflies baby, just in case you never see the stars

    that line's pulled me through a bunch already.

    :D
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
  • there's a song by the band the Drams
    called fireflies

    I'll have to type all the lyrics later...

    appreciate the fireflies baby, just in case you never see the stars

    that line's pulled me through a bunch already.

    :D

    I know your scene and it's over/see the beauty being where you are/ appreciate the fireflies baby, just in case you never see the stars

    I remembered the other line...
    :D
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
  • Quote:
    Originally Posted by Holey Ghost
    beautiful poem Stoneygal!

    I love fireflies

    and this line

    "Glowing embers of melted sighs
    Are what you leave behind..."
    stoneygali wrote:
    me too :)

    glad you're enjoying what you've inspired.

    I'm glad I've inspired you, and that's the beauty of this place,....not only can publish our art, but inpire others or get inspired ourselves.
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • brain of cbrain of c Posts: 5,213
    fireflies are beetles.[/sie]
  • brain of cbrain of c Posts: 5,213
    fireflies are beetles.
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    I know your scene and it's over/see the beauty being where you are/ appreciate the fireflies baby, just in case you never see the stars

    I remembered the other line...
    :D

    i like that. thank ya, and hopefully the rest of the record will be just as good. you inspiried me to buy it ;)
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • stoneygali wrote:
    i like that. thank ya, and hopefully the rest of the record will be just as good. you inspiried me to buy it ;)
    aww.

    awesome.
    It's a "really pretty" record.
    I can't stop listening to it.

    It just kind of hits me in the face - everything on it seems so personal, real.
    It was one of the records I needed at the time - which is a fantastic thing.
    Please let me know what you think.
    Keep writing.

    :D
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
  • I like that Stevie Nicks song "Fireflies" from their live album. Silhouette of a dream...
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    I like that Stevie Nicks song "Fireflies" from their live album. Silhouette of a dream...

    Yeah, she's great. One of those artists that can't be replicated. For emaple, have ya ever been channel surfing & passed American Idol to find some twit butchering Janis Joplin!! I can't stand those who mess with Jimi!! If ya can't do it right then don't fuck around with it!!

    here's a bit for you to read:

    Breathlessly I shudder
    beneath the sensation where our spirits meet.
    Your thoughts echo through my mind
    which is encircled by your soul’s passion.

    A finger traces the lines of my heart
    performing a melody of serenity.
    Each string savors the gentle pull
    and hides the desire to engage a different tune.

    The impact of our united souls
    incinerates each promise to die alone.
    Delivering persuasion of everlasting hope,
    and surrendering to eternal love with you.
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    you're a romantic pony
    running wild
    just like a child

    But full of wisdom and truth
    as if you're long in the tooth

    My kind of poet
    and you show it

    I'm glad to read you
    and that's the truth!
    Feels Good Inc.
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