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Glass of red wine

stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'd feel so safe with him. With his sweet, cunning, loving. face it who wouldn't run to him! I listen to his singing voice at nite to put me to sleep. As his voice relaxes my nevers or elevates them. Seems as through he always has a way to get inside of me. But I allow him to... so then I know how he feels. He is like a bottle of fine red wine
I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
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  • T C HT C H Posts: 85
    okay... i was thinking this was going to be a kindred spirit.. someone who was drinking red wine (like i am right now) and listening to/thinking about pj, but it appears I have come across someone who is in a psycho-sexual orgasm about eddie..
    would i be correct?
    I've got a Gibson without a case, but I can't get that even tanned look on my face...
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    I wrote this back in high school like 10 years ago and no one has even seen my work till now!

    When I said" he just gets inside of me" I don't mean sexually.. i mean it a spiritual way... like his voice catches me attention always, no matter what I may be doing at the time.. and back then it was always while doing my homework!

    I wonder what Ed himself would think of this old poem of mine??
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • T C HT C H Posts: 85
    Hey, your poetry is good.

    it just took me by suprise...

    Im... trying to think of something deep to say... ill post in a minute..
    I've got a Gibson without a case, but I can't get that even tanned look on my face...
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    by the way I love red wine, so maybe I am a kindred spirit???
    I've always used strong words in my work
    Sometimes I find myself to be too passionate..
    so it sounds sexual.. but for a teenager's view
    especially comming from a virgin... maybe!
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    you didn't affend me in any way I through your interpution to be funny and it made me think!
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • T C HT C H Posts: 85
    hey stoney,

    I just.. i don't know ... im having a tough kinda day.. im having trouble trying to keep a thought so forgive me please.

    But, i know what you mean how eddie's lyrics effect your soul.

    I will never be the same again because of Pearl Jam. In them I found someone who understood. Someone who felt the pain and the joy that I felt..
    I've got a Gibson without a case, but I can't get that even tanned look on my face...
  • stoneygalistoneygali Posts: 148
    there, there I understand
    I'm not always as witty when I really need to be
    I never meant to hurt you, mi diablo, mi amigo, but I've built up so much character I have an alter ego. I have to make a clean break & I have to do it quick because the pain you give me babe would make Cal Ripken call in sick!!!
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    stoneygali wrote:
    I'd feel so safe with him. With his sweet, cunning, loving. face it who wouldn't run to him! I listen to his singing voice at nite to put me to sleep. As his voice relaxes my nevers or elevates them. Seems as through he always has a way to get inside of me. But I allow him to... so then I know how he feels. He is like a bottle of fine red wine

    i read this and eddie did come to mind.
    and you're right, he does get inside you.
    i too am a huge fan of red wine.
    and they both elevate and relax your nerves depending on your mood.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • hellbent1hellbent1 Posts: 44
    I know what you mean I feel the same!
    "The money flew down and stole my cracker!"

    "Every time I go to the doctors I get a jacket, a straight one. It makes me feel special because I get to hug myself."

    I am myself like you somehow.
    I'll wait up in the dark for you to speak to me.
    How I've opened up. Release me.
  • hellbent1hellbent1 Posts: 44
    catefrances wrote:
    i read this and eddie did come to mind.
    and you're right, he does get inside you.
    i too am a huge fan of red wine.
    and they both elevate and relax your nerves depending on your mood.

    I understand completely, in fact I couldn't have said it better myself
    ~Danalyn aka stoneygali
    "The money flew down and stole my cracker!"

    "Every time I go to the doctors I get a jacket, a straight one. It makes me feel special because I get to hug myself."

    I am myself like you somehow.
    I'll wait up in the dark for you to speak to me.
    How I've opened up. Release me.
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