Thank you

anonymousanonymous Posts: 21
As we lay side by side
our bodies naked and on fire
the heat so intense
passions flames rising higher
I gaze into your eyes
and you return the stare
we have removed our inhibitions
they fall away,layer by layer
my lips kiss your neck softly
as you whisper to me sweetly
time has stopped briefly
as if hanging in mid air
I awake from my sleep
all alone in the middle of the night
I am grateful to you
for you
lead me from the solitude of dark
into the promise and hope of light.
I remain,
anonymous
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Nice love story anon.....

    Could you find one for me?:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • edeneden Posts: 407
    anonymous wrote:
    As we lay side by side
    our bodies naked and on fire
    the heat so intense
    passions flames rising higher
    I gaze into your eyes
    and you return the stare
    we have removed our inhibitions
    they fall away,layer by layer
    my lips kiss your neck softly
    as you whisper to me sweetly
    time has stopped briefly
    as if hanging in mid air
    I awake from my sleep
    all alone in the middle of the night
    I am grateful to you
    for you
    lead me from the solitude of dark
    into the promise and hope of light.

    Wow..
    Im speechless, but turned on ;)
    Youre a great poet..whomever you are :)
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    a dream....it reminds me of one i had not that long ago.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    awesome wording with good syllable usage it comes together perfect in the middle


    thanks
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    All I can say is....awesome poem.
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
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