her brightness shines

anonymousanonymous Posts: 21
I hold her hand through a forest of confusion
and she comforts me with her voice
I am lost in these trees,tall grass and dark clouds
but she allows me to see clearly without choice
as I make my way around obstacles and closed roads
she is always there to lead me away from the danger
and all the hatred,the self doubt and selfishness
surrounded by friends but befriended by a stranger
I know she is there though I know I can't see
I can feel her presence as her words heal this scar
and if the chance for us to meet is simply a dream
then let me sleep forever and we will meet on a star
I remain,
anonymous
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thats what love is all about:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    i already told you how i felt about this one...
    but just wanted to say "keep it up, keep sharing your work"
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    i think this is great ;)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem! I truely loved it!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    anonymous wrote:
    surrounded by friends but befriended by a stranger

    truly outstanding
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • MOON LOVEMOON LOVE Posts: 35
    I hope the two of you meet....
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