3,000 miles to live

anonymous

She's the last thing on my mind
when my head hits the pillow
She's the first thing in my head
when my eyes turn out the light
this ocean of what may never be
the miles that may never be travelled
these obstacles that lay before us
perhaps too high to overcome
are forgotten for a few moments
as I simply take a breath of her beauty
and my body is filled with her
as I float to where she is
to where we can dream together
and awaken to a life meant to be

violet ray

good luck...




i wish
i wish
i wish...

justam

I like this one!

eden

anonymous wrote:

She's the last thing on my mind
when my head hits the pillow
She's the first thing in my head
when my eyes turn out the light
this ocean of what may never be
the miles that may never be travelled
these obstacles that lay before us
perhaps too high to overcome
are forgotten for a few moments
as I simply take a breath of her beauty
and my body is filled with her
as I float to where she is
to where we can dream together
and awaken to a life meant to be

A world where we can love
a life above the fray
an existance where all we need to do
is f*uck our days away

Then hold each other tight
in the afterglow Ill sigh
and wait until the next sweet time
your body makes me high

Hope you dont mind my addition

anonymous

eden wrote:

A world where we can love
a life above the fray
an existance where all we need to do
is f*uck our days away

Then hold each other tight
in the afterglow Ill sigh
and wait until the next sweet time
your body makes me high

Hope you dont mind my addition

I don't mind at all. Your addition took the piece
to a more erotic level although the use of the
"f" word might embarass her a bit. I'll let you
know.

eden

anonymous wrote:

I don't mind at all. Your addition took the piece
to a more erotic level although the use of the
"f" word might embarass her a bit. I'll let you
know.

I completely understand.
I myself dont use foul language in my day to day speaking.
Recently I was advised by a friend that cussing can be a powerful tool..
but I told him it only degrades a relationship unless is is contained to the bedroom only. The bedroom is a realm where all the usual rules get thrown out the window I think

olderman

eden wrote:

A world where we can love
a life above the fray
an existance where all we need to do
is f*uck our days away

Then hold each other tight
in the afterglow Ill sigh
and wait until the next sweet time
your body makes me high

Hope you dont mind my addition

it's a great addition!! it's f*ck'n COOOOL!