picture this

anonymous

She spoke to me through a glass window
that peered deep within my soul
She could tell what I was thinking
She could tell my life was cold
The words exchanged between us
bringing us closer with each breath
my heart continues pounding
long after she has left
my eyes unable to see her
her image I am left to ponder
my body begins to tremble and shake
my mind but left to wander
as I gaze upon her beauty now
her picture has brought to light
everything I imagined she would be
these blinded eyes she has given birth to my sight

coleen

lovely sentiments, does she know that she has inspired these thoughts in you?

eden

coleen wrote:

lovely sentiments, does she know that she has inspired these thoughts in you?

I was wondering the same thing..
If she doesnt know, you should definately tell her

No woman in her right mind could resist such beautiful thoughts put to poetry...

anonymous

eden wrote:

I was wondering the same thing..
If she doesnt know, you should definately tell her

No woman in her right mind could resist such beautiful thoughts put to poetry...

thank you for the kind words.
As much as I would love to believe it true
not all women like the romantic type.

I would love to think that the lady these words are intended for
is well aware of how I feel about her.

violet ray

anonymous wrote:

thank you for the kind words.
As much as I would love to believe it true
not all women like the romantic type.

I would love to think that the lady these words are intended for
is well aware of how I feel about her.

i hope she is aware. there are way too many miscommunications out there.

as always, i like this one too.

Nast

All woman like the romantic type! They just don't often realize it until they're divorced from their second failed marriage and 4 or 5 kids later...

I only joke.

I honestly can't see a woman who doesn't like a little romance... unless they've went through something traumatic in their past.

I've heard one guy call 'guys who write poetry' gay...

But it was his girlfriend I stole with such...

-Always D

eden

Nast wrote:

All woman like the romantic type! They just don't often realize it until they're divorced from their second failed marriage and 4 or 5 kids later...

I only joke.

I honestly can't see a woman who doesn't like a little romance... unless they've went through something traumatic in their past.

I've heard one guy call 'guys who write poetry' gay...

But it was his girlfriend I stole with such...

-Always D

Soooo, true!!
Whoever you are anonymous baby, gimme that poetry and you own me heart, soul, body and mind

punkrockgrrl

those words seem to be filled with honesty,... integrity,... true love,... and most of all it gave me chills!!!!! u have a soul mate out there,... may u find you're split apart!

violet ray

ok, i guess i'm re-reading now...i didn't realize today's was the first you've posted in almost a year.

still like your work just as much, if not more.

twin1

anonymous wrote:

thank you for the kind words.
As much as I would love to believe it true
not all women like the romantic type.

I would love to think that the lady these words are intended for
is well aware of how I feel about her.

wow, I just can't even imagine...she is very lucky that you care so deeply for her and I hope she does know...and cares as deeply back...wonderful read, hits straight to the heart

Ms. Haiku

So, when I read your poetry should I see it as self-disclosure or should I see it as a possibility in anyone's life?

Ms. Haiku

Also, who inspires you to write . . . musicians, poets, novelists, historians?

violet ray

i'm brain dead.

i remember now. i pm'd you about your writing last year.

afan

That was very pretty. I don't think all guys are romantic, in fact, I know some are not.

yatahe

dear anonymous, do you think she might be on here reading your words?? it's funny because i had a dream that the guy i was in love with was buisy on the computer all the time but didn't realize i was right beside him (literally-the dream's setting was in an office). i was on the computer too but he did not see me...just came to mind and thought i'de tell you that she might be right beside you. good luck.

you are

i really like this one. very sweet. if a guy felt like this about me....that would be amazing. i keep getting the jerks.