so sorry

anonymousanonymous Posts: 21
A dagger plunged deep into my heart
deserved due to this knife I put in her back
never intended to hurt with my words
never meant to demean her world
I see now the err of my way
I fear divine forgiveness is not mine today
She said we were close to each others hearts
I now fear I have driven them apart
sorry may not be enough and too late
I will leave it up to her to decide our fate
the only thing I want her to know
is this love that I feel will never go
I remain,
anonymous
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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    damn...

    i hope you tell HER and not just us or she might never know.

    if you hurt her that bad, she may not think you want her to "decide fate"
    she may not think you want her at all.



    as always, another good one.




    tell her!
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • taken my breath away,... wow... I agree about telling her.... been there before and on both ends... to risk nothing is the worst risk there is!!! I know,... we're light years apart now,.. once upon a time, oh so close it seemed.. i felt it... i could feel him 2000 miles away... today,....30th b-day and a world away.
    In this river
    All shall fade to black...
    In this river
    Ain't no comin' back
    Z.W.
  • edeneden Posts: 407
    anonymous wrote:
    A dagger plunged deep into my heart
    deserved due to this knife I put in her back
    never intended to hurt with my words
    never meant to demean her world
    I see now the err of my way
    I fear divine forgiveness is not mine today
    She said we were close to each others hearts
    I now fear I have driven them apart
    sorry may not be enough and too late
    I will leave it up to her to decide our fate
    the only thing I want her to know
    is this love that I feel will never go

    :(

    >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    is in the hands of god i believe

    we drank and ate food then decided to express how we felt about faith and fear and for seconds at a time we got lost but the remaining light of discussion is that we dont ever have to think or feel perfect because we arent

    we are gods daughters and sons
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • beautiful poem..
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