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A Pearl jam tale...

punkrockgrrlpunkrockgrrl Posts: 26
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Alone...In my Tree
Sometimes it's U...
I'm open,..No Way
A Garden for U--
A breath and a scream
Your footsteps they fade...
An ocean so deep,...
You wash away.
Hard to Imagine
You push me... you pull me~
Around the bend
I go
Innocent Bystander...?
--I know--
Present tense
Your a angel
Passion sublime
In my rearviewmirror
the bugs,...
Once upon a time...
Dirty Frank on my wishlist
A love the color red
coming back...cloaked in black
Can't sleep in Satan's bed.
An animal in hiding.....
Red Mosquito draining blood....
Musing over the brain of J
beside pilate in the mud
but I still revel
and I smile
at the dissident that is U.......
An even flow of truth in a wave
I feel when you pry to~~
To a state of love and trust
off he goes
and I go....
Solo.
Low in the light
Release in the dark...
Given to fly,--but why go?
The plaque on the wall says
NOT FOR YOU
Faithfull
Hail! Hail!
Who you are...
One last kiss
before your last exit
You fade away....
In your mini fast car...
tremor christ
leatherman
nothingman
something man,.....
Mankind craves immortality...
Are we all still alive????
On a leash
the solution???
Whipping our words....
on a world of indifference....
Spin the b;ack circle.
Can we undo the evolution???
Alone..
On my porch,...
Sometimes it's U...
In my soul,...
On my mind...
Always...
It's U,....
In this river
All shall fade to black...
In this river
Ain't no comin' back
Z.W.
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Comments

  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    Creative afternoon? :)
    It's good, I like it a lot:)
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • illegal pantsillegal pants Posts: 13,471
    i love it

    :):):):):)
    wah
  • anarchist_grungeranarchist_grunger Posts: 161
    this is sooooooooooooooo great...congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!
    "It was a kind of a sick, disturbed rock opera - if Nietzsche were to write a rock opera,"-Jeff Ament about Eddie's first three songs

    I've had enough, said enough, felt enough, I'm fine now.
    Push me pull me. See ya later

    <present tense inhabiter #0003 & Even Flow psycho #0036>
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    This is probably the only poem ever on this poetry forum that's fit with the remit of the mods' brief, and been unambiguously PJ inspired! :)

    Thanks for this.
  • MOON LOVEMOON LOVE Posts: 35
    you are amazing, I enjoy everything I have read so far...
  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    MOON LOVE wrote:
    you are amazing, I enjoy everything I have read so far...


    I agree..-> We want more!:)
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • punkrockgrrlpunkrockgrrl Posts: 26
    Afternoon??? Man that took me less than 30 minutes :) When I get going the wheels don't stop spinnin' till my tank runs empty and sometimes that takes over 2-3 days!!! My husband is still trying to get use to the way I write... I go into my own world and need to be alone sometimes... I guess I am a VERY hard gal to live with!!!
    In this river
    All shall fade to black...
    In this river
    Ain't no comin' back
    Z.W.
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    fun to read. thanks! :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • punkrockgrrlpunkrockgrrl Posts: 26
    i wish i could say the same about living through it!!!
    In this river
    All shall fade to black...
    In this river
    Ain't no comin' back
    Z.W.
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