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Orbit

punkrockgrrlpunkrockgrrl Posts: 26
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Orbiting on the outside
Burning from afar
Fire for the one
Spun 'round the shooting star
Grounded by resilience
On this endless fight
Complex are the questions
Answers elude my sight
Combative permission
Partial permission
Invasive intensity
Violative acquisition
Yeiding to the passion
Shrouded by my fear
Uncertain of what I'm approaching
I feel it drawing near
Ambiguos signals
Static filled transmissons
Cannot trust where they guide me
Cannot surrender permission
Still I orbit on the outside
I burn
but
from afar
My fire for the one
My one
The shooting star
In this river
All shall fade to black...
In this river
Ain't no comin' back
Z.W.
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Comments

  • MOON LOVEMOON LOVE Posts: 35
    I like it...thank you.
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Posts: 570
    It runs pretty smoothly. Good job.
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  • punkrockgrrlpunkrockgrrl Posts: 26
    i like this one A LOT!!! i feel good about it.
    In this river
    All shall fade to black...
    In this river
    Ain't no comin' back
    Z.W.
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