Society's Loss Is "Our" Gain

The RatThe Rat Posts: 6
Fantastical, orgasmical, the strength keeps coming on
Their beautiful, blood-ridden pockets funded by this epic con
Who knows how they've made it? Their reign of supremic shit
The black liquid pumping through their veins, suckling at Nature's tit
My child is unborn through fear, unharmed by what could be
Apologies for my brutal punch, theoretical yet unfree
That disgusting pride that angers all, sickened to the core
Who the fuck gave them the right to make us all their whore?

Rejection and suffocation
Holding us without remorse
Society's loss is our gain
Their loss is our gain

And so today, we've moved on strong. It's coming together, boys
That puppet-fuck is sitting Lordlike, baiting over his toys
"There's nothing to fear, no need to fret. All is going to plan"
The problem is that their decision didn't involve society's man
Black, blue, yellow, white, all creed, all race cry out
The end of Earth, America's way, is going to wipe us out
The bag's over our head now, guys. Vision is no longer scene
Contradictory evidence encouraging Dubya's regime

Rejection and suffocation
Holding us without remorse
Society's loss is our gain
Their loss is our gain

Herd us in now!

We're lucky, aren't we? Ignorant bliss. The most joyous way of life
Jaguar grace, Audi chic... hell, we even have jobs without strife
So plod along, you gorgeous fool. You're perfect for them to watch
You ain't gonna fuss, no way you'll fret. Trust me, you're safe in your hutch
Slice my wrists. There's a plan. Watch the blood finally come from one
About time, relate, don't hesitate. Unify yourself until it's done
At most, you'll die. But who cares? Martyr! Saint! Hero! Loved by all
They like us folks. We're stupid fucks. Hell, we heed the call

End it. FUCKING END IT
YOU'VE GOT A NERVE TO BE ASKING A FAVOUR!!!!!
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Comments

  • I think you got the balance between urgent politically committed commentary and "poetry" really just right. Are these song lyrics? They remind me of Dylan's "It's All Right Ma (I'm Only Bleeding)" in places, but it's all very original. It's difficult to write a protest song without sounding self-righteous, but you manage to produce something that's pretty vital and sincere. And sustained in being bloody angry too. Thanks for sharing this. I for one shall be delighted to read more of your work.
  • The RatThe Rat Posts: 6
    Yeah, they're song lyrics. It's a pretty thrashy number, quite unlike most of my other stuff to be honest. Glad you liked it :)
    YOU'VE GOT A NERVE TO BE ASKING A FAVOUR!!!!!
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    dya mind if I mince my words.....I think you fukkin or whoever wrote this....can fukkin write good angry shit......but I don't agree with ya......but at the same time......it's so fukkin urgent and right!!! I might well havta agree wit ya....hehehehe
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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