chatty love poem

cartoonnightmarecartoonnightmare Posts: 52
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
it was my birthday
so he took me out for a treat
i found the scenery charming
and i really liked the beat
however i included him in my choice
i had to hunch over to hear his voice
and when i realized he might like to go
i asked him something so i could know:

can you hear me?
yes i hear you
do you like this band?
no not really
you want to leave?
yes if you dont mind
ok then

we walk to the next club
everyone looks like a freak
little 17 year old girls walking around
and 50 year old males lurking in the corners
but i stayed cuz he wanted to
we danced a little but not like the others
we saw stuff ive only heard about
and that was when i asked my date:

can you hear me?
yes i hear you
do you like this band?
no not really
you want to leave?
yes if you dont mind
ok then
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like this one very much! :D

    Where do they go after they leave the second place?
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  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    oh this is so cute, I'm loving this!! :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • thanks guys. :)

    they went to McDonald's after the second place.
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