i wanna tell you i love you

lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
im just not sure how because ive done it before
and so many others i found who feel it all more
when distance is all we have
i find you everywhere

its a song in the west on a highway thats crazy
sorrounded by accidents and stunts that are insanely
out of this world and to sad to be true
when i know your there
i wanna tell you


this poem is for my family
thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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  • KovoKovo Posts: 255
    "when distance is all we have
    i find you everywhere "
    Every once in awhile I'll write or read a line that I love as much as this. Great line.
    I shouldn't have to fight a battle I'll never win, just to lose those I've never had.
  • I live far away from home...This is a nice poem for me at this time.. thanks for sharing....
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I like it......yeah, I do :)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    lovin kind wrote:
    im just not sure how because ive done it before
    and so many others i found who feel it all more
    when distance is all we have
    i find you everywhere

    its a song in the west on a highway thats crazy
    sorrounded by accidents and stunts that are insanely
    out of this world and to sad to be true
    when i know your there
    i wanna tell you


    this poem is for my family
    I find you evrywhere....

    I wish i could tell him that.....

    ;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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